I like it, but I can't really hear your bassline partially through. I'll give a more in-depth response, but currently I'm using some crappy headphones.

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Hi,
The first thing I notice, ur bass, the first one is not centered? I heard it stronger in the left side than the right one.
I likve the lead, nice sound, the melodie is really sweet later, very liking it mate.
The structure is way too basic though, we have an intro, buld up, break, I would work out more with the structure, giving a stronger place to each section.
Also the drums are way too basic, you have a kick, hats, clap, but I dont hear any background drum supporting them, use a loop or something else to give more life to your drums mate because they sound very basic, above all at 5:00 Minutes.
Other than that I really like the vibe, melodie, production is clean, the kick is a bit weak as you already said, looking forward to the final version :
Good job keep it up .
Kopi =o.

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I liked the melody alot! You got a pretty good sound out of Reason. I enjoyed the arp and main lead mostly, but I've always been a sucker for a 16th note stutter bass

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djlogik,

Wow, I thought the bass line was too loud. Man mixing is so hard. I even got myself some KRK monitors thinking I could tell the volume better, but it's still difficult. I'll try to pump up the bass line more. so more volume, EQ too?


kopi_luwak

I'll try to center bass. Yeah, I thought about layering another looped drum set underneath, but thought it might sound too busy. I was hoping to get a nice clean kick sound going. Just like Mr. Static_blue's tunes...Thanks for the comments Kopi.

nVision

Thanks man.

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Last edited by marcusk on Feb-09-2006 at 00:06