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DUDE !!!
You got something there. I'm impressed, there's definitly some great material there !
I was about to write an ok review then around the end of the track I was like "wait a minute there's something excellent here". If you get passed the mastering, flat sound and odd levels you can see soem very good substance.
I suggest you pass the whole thing thru some mastering, compressing a little and also work on your level they definitly need some tuning. Your bass is definitly too loud compared to the rest. With some fine tuning on mastering you will be able to loud up everything, your drum will be more punchy while leaving all the place for the bass to be heard without being too present.
I think you should still work on that track, for I trully believe that it has some really good substance. I'm not sure about the lyrics though, love erection kinda sound a lil' first degree to me. Love erection is kinda straight forward and lack a little subtlety IMO.
excellent work !!
I detect great talent here.
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