Haven't posted anything since "The Story Of" and I'm a little unsure of how this sounds (I've been hearing it so much lately so I can't tell if it's good or not). So I came to the aide of my fellow TAs!

Please do me favor and comment on the melody (or anything else) of this track so I can make the necessary amends and finish this piece.

EDIT: finished and titled it "Inamorata"

EDIT: picked up by RealMusic Recordings. Will post info about release as things pan out.

EDIT: Released thursday, Feb 23. I wish I could change the damn title of this thread so it doesn't say "unfinished" and "untitled"

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Last edited by EtherealSL on Feb-23-2006 at 01:29

this aint really my thing. its a bit dreamy for me so i might not be the best person to review, but...

its dreamy in a nice way with a really professional sound to it. melody is nice and the submelodies make the track sound complex and full. im not a great fan of the guitar synth. i would rather hear a more traditional sine or square sound or maybe like a horn or somthing... i think the guitar sounds a bit lacking in power and fullness. a really distorted guitar may sound nice if it works with the track? not too overpowering in the volume stakes tho.

i enjoyed your track

rich

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absolutely fantastic song. its like floating on an ocean breeze in the middle of night. LAME. but the song is good.

really, IMO this is the best song ive heard on these boards in weeks.

Hey,
Listening ... Yup really dreamy, I like that sin synth melodie.
I was whole track waiting to the pads to release but never hapenned lol ..
The plucked thing is sweet, some distortion as someone else mentioned would work fine imo.
In overall, nice track mate .
Kopi =o.

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During the bass part there seems to be some kind of crackling idk what it is. I think the melody and subtle ones are great along with the atmosphere of the track, the kick tho seems to be a lil too punchy but that is just me.
Great track

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elipse, you're right, the bass clips a bit and i need to fix it... i've just been lazy abotu it, and will get around to it.

rich, i should add more distortion to the lead, i'll do that and update teh sample.

i also think i need to subdue the hi's a bit on the percussion, imo.

dj hollen, amazing analogy

kopi luwak, thanks man.

hopefully i'll get around to updating this song soon.

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This is indeed amazing stuff. The percussion is awesome. The melodies are very light and dreamy. It's excellent chillout stuff for me ... might just be me, but maybe there's a little too heavy reverb on the sine type synth in the beginning. Anyway, this one has huge potential.

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very nice start - but I don't like that kick at all needs somethin a bit softer maybe..I don't know really but all the sounds are very nice - good job.

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thanks for the comments and suggestions... i took them into consideration as i finished the song off: "Inamorata"


so here ya go... a longer sample and a teeny bit of breakbeats too (I couldn't help myself)

updated link

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Last edited by EtherealSL on Sep-14-2005 at 07:32

the track is very nice,some high frecuencys but thats no problem,lots of atmoshpere,good job.

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You fixed the kick - sounds less 'up front now' - I didn't think you needed the big kick in a melodic track like this - sounds better now

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