hello people here`s another creation by covert23.....
all feedback good or bad welcomed as its all a big learning
curve for me and it helps to get an extra set of ears on tunes..
i keep trying to improve with every track so i hope you enjoy...

hers the link...

http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...WX2KV93WHYXGH0I

you might have to past it into your browser....
sorry for the inconvenience...
all help much apreciated......

thanks

the almost tropical lead in... i dont like it. im seeing tucan sam over here.

the first 3 mins arent much. to be honest, if i werent out of give you a solid review i wouldnt have continued it even that long.

however, it does get interesting a little later on im 5:40 in and its been pretty good for at least a minute and a half.

you have a very distinctive style and its working for me. by the end of the track im really fucking digging it.

i might try a diffrent lead and make the track more intresting thanks for the ears...

Hi there! As you asked I'm writing a back review. I'd like to say that the track sounds kinda original, its good nowadays when you're making original stuff! Thats the big plus of this track IMHO. The beginning of the track and the ending seem to screw the main idea up. Sounds really weird... I would improve it or take main parts from the middle of the track for the beginning. Also the quality is not that great. So, overall the work is nice, but I'm waiting for updates!!!

The beginning is f'd up. It's not the drum, it's the seams between the parts. The bass at 1min is very good. I like the swishy thing at 2:15 very much. But after hear it gets a little monotonous. The beginning and hear are good places to tighten up. The pad sound at 3:15 is kind of eh, maybe arpeggiate it? The motif and drums at 3:30 are very good. Again dull at 4:00, energy sags to much without a new voice, roll or something. The break is good. Really excellent at 5:00. The arp voice is quite good too. The come back is fine. The end as pointed out suffers the same as the beginning of course. I personally would take the beginning and end to another song, change the one pad, and tighten up. Good stuff.