some nice sounds. i like the sweeping pads.

and your percs are nice.

the synth that the track starts on definately needs some reverb. it sounds too dry imo.

the only thing id say is wrong is that the beat keeps going too long. try breakin it up with a few mini breaks/pauses in the kick....

some of your effects seam to clash with the track a bit.

break- i like it. sounds dark spacy and cool. quite menacing.

lead synth is a bit standard. i recon a clean sine would work better and would be less obvious.

the transition between the break and where the beat comes back is not working that well. i think its cos the lead is quite trancy. but the style of the rest is a lot more proggy and sophisticated..

some nice parts - your atmospheres are nice. try making them more of the feature instead of trying to make it bangin trance, your stuff is deep..

rich

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yea the synth at the start was only added in so i didn't do much work on it. I 've got another mix of it which us less trancy still have to finish them both. Need more time on my hands.

Cheers for the feedback tho. I'll take all on board and get this one finished.