I think you've got something there. The hook is catchy, I think you should try and finish it.

thanks man.....its one of those songs that you just dont know how to finish though

any ideas would be great

listening now...

cool intro and stuff.

so from 1:04 to 1:19 i think you should add a little fx in the backround...maybe not i dunno, somthing to consider.

i suppose the hook is cool. not really my thing. good start.

Not sure about the hook, sounds too much like space invaders or something. But it may just not be my bag. All the other elements rock though mate nice bass and effects, good percussion, nice breaks. All rockin fella apart from the main hook for me mate

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Swayzak - Grace's State [Dub] (Guicy J ReDub)

yeah i thought that i migfht need to change that hook a little. same riff but maybe a diff. sample. effects i do need for sure. but im not the best at that.

keep in mind i am making this on fruityloops. its the only thing i know how to use!