Ur a grrl? Omg pixplz!

I'm loving the acid in this song. Very tight.

The wayyy low bass range is kinda muddy. I can't tell where one note ends and the other begins. A bit more on the mids for your bass could help with that.

After the first break, you could use some more complex percs to give the song more energy. Even just a sixteenth note run would help here.

That gating at around 4:10 was tight.

4:13, you're having percussion energy problems. Either that or you have the requisite percs and they aren't loud enough. Also at 4:39, the two leads are kind of muddy. Try stereo separating them, maybe. Perhaps subtractive synth on the left, supersaw on the right?

And the acid again. Mmm, love that 303.

And shame on you for using your femaleness to get reviews from us guys. You're just as bad as 4am.

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cool track. i liked the melody in particular
bra skit, tjejen

how long you been makin tunes i wonder ...sound good..nice acid...keep it up.....

Will listen later, btw, there are other two female producers at TA, Gina and Acid princess are two, they produce very cool music also you should meet them and to make a female trance producers alliance :P.
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Listening, the music is pretty cool, I will concur with static about the sound a bit muffle, other than that this is a good job, keep it up .
Kopi =o.

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Last edited by kopi_luwak on Feb-11-2006 at 20:00

i like RISING SUN very much josefine!

keep up the good producing, and welcome to TA

Cool track. Has a nice vibe to it. Melodies scream through this one! Keep up the nice work.

Wow! Awesome. I'm speechless.

the more i listen the more i like........

nice work! lovely embrassing and a quite uplifting energy. nice lead in the last 3rd (that one with the 32th at the end) i'm a bit tired of snarerolls tho - i think their time has gone now, they are simply overused IMHO. the kick could have a littlebit less higher freqs, but thats a matter of taste.

it's an interesting question why women don't make electronic music that much (i think that's the case, but i'm not really shure. of course there are some like björk, ehm... ellen alien... don't know that many). could be due to the stereotype that "girls don't understand technique" and so they let it be or so. or is trance a more male music? i don't know. and i don't think so.

keep on the good work!

martin

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me likes swedish girls! me likes girls that produce! = me likes your track 'rising sun'

production quality is good..thad paddy lead is kinda annoying after some time..maybe a bit more quiet...?! but the mellowprogression of this lead is awesome!!!!

i really enjoyed listening to this!

hope the hear some more by female producers in the next time...this is a good example that they could handle the "technic" aswell...(according to martin)

// Lars

Wow...a girl that produced this kind of music...it's fantastic...

The track is very very beutiful...only a thing (for me):
A beat moooooooooooore hard.
for the rest is cool.

compliment

bye bye

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