I like the guitars.
The vocals sound like they have too much reverb.
Cool plucks.
I don't really like the vocals. They fit.
I think you should have some kind of 303 in here.
You also need more percussion layers imo.
The outro is too long.
Cool track man.
The guitar is definitely nice, an original element in this kind of music. The vocals could have slightly less reverb as The Drow said. The arpeggio at 3:30 is really nice imo it could be louder or with another layer still. I haven´t heard the original one but this is nice.
Cheers, Lakeus
Mar-11-2006 06:30
Speactra
Oltha
Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Uppsala , Sweden
Thanks for the advices.
I will decrease the reverb, and maybe add some more percussions.
Update is coming soon.
the first thing i thought about this was the quality of it! the kick and drive is amazing!!!!!!
woh! i love this. the vocals and guitar have been worked so well into the track... oh yea this is my style so much. no complaints at all here mate! you have a great talent. i would like the 320kbps of this if the original artist doesnt mind.. i love it!!
all i will say is that it would be cool if you did a dub.. using the vocals/guitar slighty more sparingly and making it a little more tech trance friendly. constant use of the guitar and vocals kind of makes it a bit more commercial sounding. dont ditch the vocals/guitar but use them more sparingly..
9.6/10 for me!
well worth the listen mate.
ps. your tone/washed! rmx worked the dancefloor again mate!
rich
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Mar-13-2006 10:02
Sinnica Hax
?SYNTAX ERROR
Registered: Jul 2004
Location: Blekinge
Ahh Speactra brings forth another quality tune, I dont have anything to say that already havent been said except that I Love it
You are showing great progress Speactra, dont stop now!
Mar-13-2006 10:42
soundrush
aka Charlie Brownz
Registered: Mar 2004
Location: In A Loop
damn dude,
this is hot... real guitars do sound soooo much better than synthetic ones. i love that bassline, realy grooves in here. good drums too. maybe the beat does sound a little bit to static with that cymbal layered over the kick. alltough, great tune.
Mar-13-2006 12:09
Speactra
Oltha
Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Uppsala , Sweden
Thank you all very much!
I am going to make a more dj friendly and more intresting mix.
This is just a fast mix, and ment to be the intro in a dj set.
As it is now it's kind of repetetive and boring, and thanks for the advices, I will correct that.
oh btw, Do tell if you need more tracks mirrored this one for example when you are happy about the track
Mar-13-2006 15:44
nils
château flight
Registered: Sep 2001
Location: örebro
rocks! good job, can't be improved
Mar-13-2006 17:41
richg101
1010101010101010101010101
Registered: Apr 2005
Location: a universal nation
i think it would be a crime to change the reverb on the vocal myself.. it works and gives it an 80's sound. which i really cool
rich
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Mar-13-2006 19:05
YoshiXL
tranceaddict
Registered: Jun 2005
Location: Houston, Tx
im only a n00b so im not gonna tell u if/what is wrong with this track. personally, i like it. hope to hear more stuff similar to this, i dig it! =D
