Finished the track. done as everyone recommended and added, deleted and modified parts etc.

Anyway heres the finished version.

Cheers in advance!

kane

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Last edited by sterilis on Mar-14-2006 at 19:03

Hey Barry

Cool vocals in the track , and you use some nice FX as well. The bassline is unconventional, and that's cool, but perhaps a more offbeat bassline would be more driving.
Some nice synths around 2.10, sounding quite cool when the beat comes back in. Perhaps the melodies could be a little less 'happy' sounding, but you are certainly improving man, good job.

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this sounds nice now

overall the sound sounds nice and balanced. i think soundclick is muffling it a bit. sounds a bit closed.

break sounds interesting and well put together.

build. the single kick is too loud. it clips. set it the same as your main kicks..

beat comes back. this sounds original and nice. the minimal percussions work well. and allow your arps to do some driving

@4;16. i love the overall sound. its groovy. and i like the blippy synth.

next break - the new synth sounds a bit out of place after all the track has done so far. i would introduce it briefly earlier in the track a couple of times just to warm it in for the listener.

beat comes back - this sounds nice. the mix of layers/percs and synths all work well.

nice work barry

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rickym - the only problem i have about making it less happy is that it will make the track too dark. ill have a look at the bassline and see what i can draw up.

richg - the second synth could be introduced ealier instead of jumping straight in, going to have a look at that kick. damn those kicks i never seem to get them right.

Thanks for the feedback guys, mostly positive which is a good sign.

Cheers!

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Listening mate, the vocals are a nice addition, this could work pretty cool into a first person shooter, you know the robot factory or sort of, I am not very sure the arpegio change from minor to major it's a good idea, the tune had an interesting vibe, and then became kinda happy, but that's my personal taste lol.
Nice Fx's over the vocals.
In overall, is sounding pretty decent, I personally would like more if the tune keeps the first seconds vibe, the happy arpegiator is not of my liking, the mixdown sounds pretty good also, but I am listening with pc speakers so I will avoid to comment about that.
Keep it up .
Kopi =o.

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guess ill have to change those happy sounds to something more dark and weird. lol

cheers mate!

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