the pitch on your kick needs reduced and EQed more.

the percs and fx drown out the kick need to look at the levels mate

bass is cool

arp is nice in the breakdown, like the melody

that melody could really make this a driving track if you sorted out the sounds around it

it needs some good mixing and mastering

good start tho

sounds like your using reason as your sequencer

cheers

kane

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First thing that hits me is that the reverb has a bit long tail, usually placed on oneshots and strings. I think you could shorten it a bit :P

Lots of suspension in that break, I like the melody, it's soothing, simple yet effective. A suggestion is to try layering that with sharper leads and fade them into the picture so the euphoric feeling gets there.

Good stuff!

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thanks for the feedback ! keep on comenting thanks a lot !

I really like the feeling of this track. I could see a nice saw arp being used here to add to the uplifting feeling and emotion in this track. The reverb tail is too long as Drik had already stated. I could really see a 2nd more extended breakdown being done on this track. Could I remix this track by any chance?

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