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Hey,
commenting as I listen.
Kick is great. Bass is present, good. It could maybe get a little funkier. The notes are too long IMO.
Strange chords. The thing is getting a little too chaotic around 1:00 in my opinion. Maybe some additional EQing will help cleaning things up.
2:30 is a nice moment, but after that short stabbing lead fades out you shouldnt let it fade in right after.
During the breakdown I was bored a little. But then you got that massive fill which works quite well.
After the fill it sounds okay. The chords are still a little odd, but the groove works quite well now.
Mustnt forget to mention the great pads. The second breakdown is much better in my opinion.
I am not 100% sure about this one. The groove works quite well, but it didnt really hold my attention. Maybe you still need to clean up the mix a little. Dont get me wrong, it sounds very good already. Keep it up! 
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Cybernetika albums (free DL): Atropos (2009) | Nanospheric (2008) | Neural Network Expansion (2007) | Promo #1 (2006) | Paralysis (2005)
homepage: http://www.cybernetika.de
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