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not really your style for the most part with the guitar.
little distortions throughout, a little is good, but it has a tad too much, almost like it's a lower bitrate or a bit of static. see if you can clean it a tad, but a little is good.
the guitar part, while very cool, is too disjointed imo. its a taste thing. some will love it, some will hate it. you may want to consider a few alternatives before deciding if you want to keep it or not at the end, or whether you can do something with it if you do decide to keep it.
overall, nice and dark. i'd start a naming process after you decide if you want to keep the guitar or not.
one suggestion if you want to go with it, use that element at 1:37 of the sample. also the guitar fits better at 1:57 or so, when you introduce a few other elements/bells & whistles.
the rest is great. not totally my style but nice and dark, unique, well done. i like 2:43, that little vocal. keep that as is, don't add it elsewhere =)
track itself is almost psy trance, oldschoolish with a mediterranean/arabic twist.
title suggestions:
desert wind
night mirage
dune
veiled eyes of fire
ps, that damn guitar is growing on me. first listen throws you for a loop, third listen, it sounds good.
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