Hey this is my first post, been reading the board for a few days and decided to join up anyways, this is a track that i just finished the other day... have a listen , leave some comments! thanks!

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Intro melody is weak, needs to be phatter mate. Sounds like its been done in Reason. Kick needs to be phatter, its too weak, EQ the bottom end so its bassyer. Bassline is good. Some nice melodies, but they need to be a little phatter mate. Very progressive. That line that comes in around 2.00 is too loud. Overall there is too many elements in the top end and not enough in the mid-range or bottom end. No Hi-Hat?

not a bad tune mate, keep it up, EQ it.

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yea its not been eqed and such, so there are things like hi-hats closed hats u cant really here... im havent gotten into the end production stuff yet as im still trying to learn all the other stuff too the intro is supposed to be piano but it doesnt seem like it sounds right... i cant seem to find a good piano sample...


it was made in FL not reason btw... so im still sample searching and such... i just bought a cool disc called tension theory with lots of weird sounds for things...gonna get into those soon and see what comes out.

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Originally posted by TranscendentalP yea its not been eqed and such, so there are things like hi-hats closed hats u cant really here... im havent gotten into the end production stuff yet as im still trying to learn all the other stuff too the intro is supposed to be piano but it doesnt seem like it sounds right... i cant seem to find a good piano sample... it was made in FL not reason btw... so im still sample searching and such... i just bought a cool disc called tension theory with lots of weird sounds for things...gonna get into those soon and see what comes out.

Use Limewire to download samples mate. Will save you money. Illegal buy who cares, music should be shared for the love of it not for the cash.

Reason has a piano sound in it...different types. Intro sounds nothing like a Piano and is more like a trance line/saw. Production take AGES to get right so dont be hard on yourself, the melodies and rhythm are there so thats the main thing.

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ok

im listening and commenting as we speak.

the intro sounds pretty weird.

i dont like the intro synth, sounds pretty standart and the melody sounds kinda random.

wind synth sounds good but its a pretty banal thing.

the kick comes in and it sounds pretty weird. the plucky synth realy doesn't fit here.

clap sounds a bit dry, i would use some reverb on it.

the bassline has to much low frequencies. it just swallows up the your kick.

percussions sound very thin.

1.00 i realy like the subtle sequence in background. sounds cool.

1.47 i like the synth that comes in there, also very cool.

nice strings in the break.

3.00 bassline variation sounds kinda weird / disharmonic.

nice bells you introduce later, i would make them a bit louder.


buildup sounds quite strange. it definitely lacks of drive.
seems like you've created some good sounds here but most of them don't fit together. like taking elements that dont fit together and puting them in a row (one sound stops, another comes in...)

i think you should quit some elements a make the left elements fit together.


bye, nik.