i like the strings at the beginning...not sure about how the kick & synth come straight but i really the like the main sine-type melody and nice pads in the background - it could with more percussion - that hi hat is overpowering at times..but overall,this is quite good - nice melodies in it!

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Unbelievable slow to load...
I like this, the mixing is done well and the melodies are beautifull. The strings at the beggining prepare you for a really emotional track. But, the break is too empty, your piano needs much more atmosphere. Try delay or deeper reverb. For now it sounds too simple. The synth before the break is exciting and it continues playing along the piano, I really like that.
This has potential (especially the lead) but it needs more work. It needs a different instrument than a piano or a very original effect work to make it stand out from the crowd of similar releases.
I hope you'll work on it more.
Effero

melodies are really good in this, im @ the piano break and it sounds great, but would love to hear some reverb on that piano sound... oh this synth is awesome coming in...

thanks for sharing.

Thanks you very much for all of your comments who so much encourage me. But today i don't know if I have possibilities to exploit the potential of this stuff, because it's a old project and I don't think that to change a reverb can change the total aspect. The emotion was the principal objective and i thinks all of you felt this emotion.

Technical details, if they are rework, will be important for this song and I think I have to work a very long time on this stuff for give a pro dimension.

But I keep your opinions. If the heart says to me, I will worked over again it with you comments.

Greetz.

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LS 504

been waiting 10 mins on it playing and it hasnt.

i give up!

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hehehe I must give this one up to =( so incredebly laggy =(

EDIT : I heard the start and i sounded good like the saw bas and the string fits in to it but I heard direcly that this tune is to dry , but i dont know it wont load the ehole tune , Use YSI

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Originally posted by mavve hehehe I must give this one up to =( so incredebly laggy =( EDIT : I heard the start and i sounded good like the saw bas and the string fits in to it but I heard direcly that this tune is to dry , but i dont know it wont load the ehole tune , Use YSI

New Link here Yousendit for mavve

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LS 504

hi m8

sonds like me, but the bassline is baaaaaaaaaaaaaad :/

i feel the emotion in your song.

Greetings

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