Is this ok?
Have been working with it for 40 minutes! Must sleep now! its 1.42 a.m. will be working about 7 hours.
Its just short with cut in the. will be extended and the melody
continue!

Cheers!

http://s57.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...WP2HAG0XZK9PM3B

Hey man, I love how it starts off with the resonant melodies.
And than later on how it picks up with the melodies. At this stage, it already has the melodic energy which is fantastic.

But @ 1:00 you bring in a bassline that I think is juss to dry sounding and plain up front. Maybe you can try lowering the volume of it and adding a reverb with a high damp. And @ 1:30 you bring in the melodies again, lovely but just a tad too loud.

Anywayz, keep up the awesome work. Can't wait for the finished version, I know i'll be listening to this unfinished one many times over.

Goodluck, eZ

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Hello!

40 minutes?! This track is not just ok, it´s really good! I have listen on it several times already! I love how all the experimentell noise work together. But I agree with dj_kyron, I think it will sound better if you lowerin the volume a bit.

Takere! Akia

I like the track, has alot of elements I've been using in my own music I get's a little crowded around 1:30, with all the melodies and pads playing at the same time, but still, sounds sweet

Thanx for the comments.

I will repost it when it will be done.

Many Cheers!