Straight to the point now. This is a track that I'm very proud of. I think it would work great in clubs, and my hope is you agree. It is House, though it's mildly trancy.
This version is mastered and, not being an adept masterer, it may be too loud. But it sounds better than the mix-down imo. Also I have written some lyrics (really only one repetive line), but I don't think they fit to the track anymore, since the idea erupted from those lyris. Ah, well...
Tell me what you guys think? Also, am I releasable yet?
Oh and also, and this might be a tad too ambitious (I hope I didn't crawl up my own asshole just yet), could any of ya'll DJs please play this in your sets and tell me what the crowd thought ;P Only if you like it of course. You never know, and you might just ask ;P
wooow nice track. started a bit boring but changes to the better very quickly. I like this and its got a cool flow the base is great, But this might be slightly overcompresed but that might be your purpose its house afterall. i like it but i still think you should finnish your lyrics and add it in , would make a great track a hit I think =) i dont know if this fits in a club fits better in my ipod haha , thats not negative but positive not everyone can make radio trax =) this sounds good keep it up add some vocals and ala wandume project , cuz this reminds me of teh good old king of my castle. Love it! releasable maybe, but with proper vocals your done! // Keep it upp - Mavve. Bra jobbat
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Apr-06-2006 01:47
PutBoy
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Dec 2004
Location: LA (Landskrona)
Thanks for listening m8 ;P
Good thing you liked the track. And I loved King of My Castle too ;D
The overcompression is partly intended, but it was a tad too much than I wanted it, to be frankly. Ah, well, first track I ever really "mastered".
Registered: May 2005
Location: Belfast/Ibiza/Manchester
not bad. like it when you introduce the bass. the breakdown is nice. think thats a piano. its very nice anyway. not too keen on the beginning sounds you have. it gets a bit annoying. think you should change this.
Beggining sounds too simple for me, the sounds are mixed ok, but the tune lacks the drive.
Your piano/synth like sound is overcompressed, it doesn't move at all.
The elements are too repetitive, there is no variety.
You need improvement on all aspects, choice of sounds (old school...) mixing (overcompressed...), mastering (dull...).
Definitely not releasable.
Effero
Apr-10-2006 17:26
cybernetica
Captain Insano
Registered: Oct 2004
Location: Cologne, Germany
Hey,
I think that organ sound is not very good. Maybe its better if you replace/rework it.
The hihats are a little too thin and hissy, plus they seem kinda sharp in the mix, distracting my ears from the midrange.
The acoustic bass is a very nice idea, feels good but the sound could be a lot "clearer" somehow.
The deep toms are mudding up the mix in the lower-mids, it conflicts with the bass.
Nice groove, but a little more time on mastering the percussion and bass could even improve the effect big time.
Some harmonies are a little odd for my taste, but maybe you wanted it that way.
Cybernetica had some fair points. I have worked with the toms, and listened more to the acoustic bass but don't know how I can improve it. It should be a little clearer yes.
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