1:58 good change. it just barely makes it. 4:00 good breakdown. good overall sound. 5:00 getting worried about the progression so close to the end, then realize its an 8+ min song. good progression. 7:00 could hear a 303 ripping in the background every other beat maybe. nice finish. I hope to someday be where you're at for sound quality and song progression.

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Nice sounds. I think the bass could use some more higher freqs, it sounds a bit muffled with only the lows. Or maybe just another thin layer on top just to add a bit of a touch to it. I'm loving the intro with the piano right now. Sounds very dark and emotional (reminds me of a sunset too ). Nice guitars - perfectly implemented.

4:45 - nice subtle switch from the dark intro to a more uplifting melody. (it's all in the chord progressions)

I like the melody - but I think it should be more dominant. Right now it just sounds like a background - as if it was missing the lead instrument. (gets much better at 6:00 - but that's a bit late in the track) This would work perfectly if it was a vocal track, but right now it feels like something's missing.

This is an awesome track overall. I'd love to have a high bitrate version of it when it's finished.

Very nice m8. Beautiful piano work, extremely soothing percussions and synths. Nice breakbeat..

AMAZING ARPS and melodies... I can't get enough man, So anxious for a final! Seriously, I'm speechless!


William Vance





rev some my stuff plz

quote:

Originally posted by Aquarian but right now it feels like something's missing. This is an awesome track overall.

I can't quite put my finger on it...

A little more melody in the rythmn...a "fuller" sound? Perhaps?

I do like it though, I'll be looking for the final

the tytle suits it. nd the brake it fu*cking gr8t! when it kicks in though it could do with a bit more build up. then u'd be flying m8t. job well done.

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thanx....

Thanks for your comments!

Definitely have to work at the bridge between breakbeat and when the kick comes in...

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did you get round 2 listening to my trak?

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Yeah. I have to agree that overall it is a good solid production. I thought that the choice of not matching the piano keys exactly to the beat with a sequencer (live feel to it) was a very good choice. although in my personal taste for progressive i like to hear ambient sounds in the background that enhances the melody upfront to help one not to solely rely on the songs melody, you were still able to manage with some variations to it (the melody). i was just wondering howlong would you keep that pad in the back for. anyhow, thanks for the awesome track

Thanks @serginka...

I think, i will change the mainpart, add some fx, mix it better and try it @ some labels...

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ah mr s-tune!

i d/loaded this a few days ago but forgot! still loving nightflight over the atlantic by the way! beautiful tune


to the point..

not a chill out track.. cool!

very pro sounding. build seems a bit long imo.

break.. i like the sounds. i can hear your chill influence in there. your really great at emotion in tracks. piano makes me wanna cry its so moving! lovely stuff indeed..

beat back.

oh this is good! the atmosphere is second to none. i love the bassline and the way it plays. its very non standard in notation. kinda catches you off guard.


6;00 - i really like this all round. lovely track indeed!

thanks for reminding me you were here! and if you have time id love this and nightflight as 320k versions. your music moves me!

rich

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Thanks for your feedback!

Well, i´ll send you a 320 kbps-version when it is finished...

Found a label for "Nightflight" + "Flying with Sunset", they are going to be digitally released at Bonzai/Elemental (wanted to announce this when they are available )

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