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i'm the alchemist without the cyst without a doubt out of the mist
dig out the grout expose the pest to take it out without the rest
they will attest my patients restorations from the best
i'm from the west i'm not an acmeist only the alchemist
Aug-01-2006 13:49
cybernetica
Captain Insano
Registered: Oct 2004
Location: Cologne, Germany
Hey,
nice atmosphere in this track. I do like the synthwork.
The bell melody is very nice.
Very good percussions, that rythm creates a lot of suspense.
The kick is too weak.
It seems to get a little too much in the end, less more "effective" layers could help.
Otherwise, good track. Keep it up!
okay here goes... start with an atmospheric synth... neat kick... but you need some eq... maybe boost the lowend a little more and give it some ... thump... awesome percs... overall very atmospheric.... ambient sortof... your kick needs to be worked on but apart from that.... tholid thtuff
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Aug-02-2006 18:35
Speactra
Oltha
Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Uppsala , Sweden
Very good atmosphere, very dreamy. I really like that bell melody
Your percussions are very good too, I like the vibe they are giving the track.
Yes, the kick needs to be more powerful.
Yea nice meoldy as people have said but I tend to agree with others the kick needs more omh and the bass line needs bringing out and integrating a little more.
Not sure about the percussion either, has a bit of a military feel about it which for me doesn't quite work in this tune. Just my .2 cents. Sounds like your going in the right direction though...
