Hey,
I am currently working on this remake of my older track "Patterns of Chaos". This one is dark, raw Psy with a heavy kick and bass combo, like the original version was. Yes, it sounds very raw and noisy; I intended that. I however feel totally uninspired about the track structure. I think I got some good sounds, but I could still use some suggestions about the structure, if you like it that way or not.

"Patterns of Chaos 2006"
Length: 8:53
Filesize ~20MB
Bitrate: 320kbps
Eqipment: FL Studio 6, ReFX Vanguard (for the bassline), Linplug Albino (for the weird FX and synthlines, also the main "lead"), Spectrasonics Atmosphere (for the ambience), rgc z3ta+ (that massive DarkPsy FM sound).

The link:
http://www.cybernetika.de/cyberneti..._chaos_2006.mp3

enjoy!

___________________
Cybernetika albums (free DL): Atropos (2009) | Nanospheric (2008) | Neural Network Expansion (2007) | Promo #1 (2006) | Paralysis (2005)

homepage: http://www.cybernetika.de

listening:

nice intro.. kick and bass is nice.. percussions are great and driving.. nice wierd effects.. 2:00 and everything sounds perfect so fine.. nice robotic effects.. i love those wierd effects u bring in.. 3:16, more chaos , 3:40 nice bass change..

5:30 everything still sounds mint and no complains..

i would have brought back all the percussions and added nack the part in between 1:00 and 2:00 back.. before just taking out all elements one by one..

excellent work though

___________________


http://soundcloud.com/subtara

Hey subtle, thanks a lot for your comment! I will take your suggestions into account

___________________
Cybernetika albums (free DL): Atropos (2009) | Nanospheric (2008) | Neural Network Expansion (2007) | Promo #1 (2006) | Paralysis (2005)

homepage: http://www.cybernetika.de

Please check PM..

Will download and have a listen after work.

Hey

Listening - nice industrial sounding intro, nice beat too, bass is cool and rolling.
Percussions are cool as well, if a little hissy.
I like the bass changes you do, and those vocal effects are very cool.
The track is definitely a journey, very trippy stuff you make, the effects in the background are excellent.
Rick

___________________
Signature Suspended as it was deemed offensive

Hey Ricky, cheers for the comment. Maybe I will make the hat section a little less hissy. We'll see about that.

___________________
Cybernetika albums (free DL): Atropos (2009) | Nanospheric (2008) | Neural Network Expansion (2007) | Promo #1 (2006) | Paralysis (2005)

homepage: http://www.cybernetika.de

intro is like something out of a horror movie.

your music would work well at love parade. from listening to the event before this would fit right in.

bass is good alothough you could make it a bit warmer. melodies are dark and interesting. liking this. the kick sounds like the same as your last track. do you use the same kick for all your tracks?

you have sounds in there that sound like prodigy - charley. did you sample them?

nice track mate and well put together.

keep at it!

___________________
Official Site - www.sterilis.co.uk

Phantastic evil intro by the king of dark-psy.

Industrial psy, that's where I see your primary nitch at.

I'm with the less-hissy on the hat section... probably should be tamed just a tad.

Otherwise, you still have my support on the track's compliments.

You've got a new bassline now - and this is more Goa-ish, which to me is, well, a tad departure from the mood I was initially enjoying. This is only an opinion, nothing more. After a while, I just accepted it without complaint.

The track definately progresses. It's proggy-psy-industrial-dark trance !

Now the middle break... the conveyer belts are having trouble initializing again. Damn those lunch breaks. Damn it, Cy, you have a talent in the sound-creation department. You psy producers sure know how to make synthesizers sound totally alien.

One thing I like about the middle breakdown is the fact that it returns to the source of the track. You say that you are having a problem with the arrangement -- since I don't listen to enough psy to tell, the theme of your track is consistent, and progresses without problem. The middle breakdown and the elements afterwards are a testiment to this.

The melodies are almost non-existent, which is nice for psy.

I hear the remainder of this track and think of a sci-fi setting with a robotics factory. There's alot of angry droids turning on the world of the living.

___________________
Audio-s

Im listening as I write.. wow, great intro really dark.. nice bassline change at 2:24, everything getting deeper, more elements coming in, now at 3:40 everything is chaos, dark full-on, really nice! at 4:10 there is the usual psy break, dont know if I enjoyed this passage...at 5:30, I really liked that kind of crying acid synth in the background, but this part have lots of elements at the same time, and with the reverbed hi-hats together everything sounds a little dirty (it gets hard to listen to details of each element)..at 6:00 evrything sound better now, the main synth stands out from the rest, and things are growing again..standard ending...this review was more a dj´s point of view (I used to be a psy dj) cause as a producer you are a step ahead of me for sure! but as a dj I think I would play easily this tune at a party, everything sounds pro IMHO, except the mastering quality (it still sounds a little dirty) but thats comparing to to the best producers! thanks for sharing!
PS: Im sorry about my english, hope you understand!

Hey, Four_on, EDO and Kane, thanks a lot for your feedback. I'm really glad I got such detailed feedback from you.

And no, I dont use the same kick for all the tracks ... but I admit I have a few kickdrum samples I favor.

___________________
Cybernetika albums (free DL): Atropos (2009) | Nanospheric (2008) | Neural Network Expansion (2007) | Promo #1 (2006) | Paralysis (2005)

homepage: http://www.cybernetika.de

Excellent job dude, I have always have loved your ambiances/atmospheres .
Kopi =o.

___________________
My forum for Down Tempo/Ambient/Chillout Music Producers.
www.chilloutworld.com
Where the world spins sligthly slower ...

thatt bassline is almost a classic now .
intro is great. a bassline change?
the percs you used here are to low.
another basschange, it sounds really cool!
the vocal bitt thing is cool.

overall its a good track!

___________________
Dymanic säger:
i love anuses
Dymanic säger:
no, but seriously, they feel good