this is much better than your previous stuff. not really hard trance but more uplifting. you have used the sound well in this and nice sounds throughout. only thing is one of your keys sound off in the breakdown. maybe have a look at that.

nice track though.

keep it up!

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yeah I figured that. I know exactly where it is too. I'll upload a newer version later. I appreciate the comment though Anyone else?

Hey everyone! I just updated the track. The final version is now there. Changed it to all the sounds I wanted and I think ya'll be pleased. Check it out! It has a nice filtered JP pad I think.

great sound'n track so far, not a huge fan of that plucky sound u got go'n.
i the kick needs a little more boom, maybe the soundclick player though.
i think when the breakdown starts its a bit to raw, maybe have the riff filtered down then slowly bring it out.
smooth build.
think it needs to kick in with more energy, hi hats aren't even existant.
nice track for sure though.
keep it up

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Yeah I figured this is going to be the final version unless this has a possibility of being signed. Since I know that won't happen...I've decided the sounds are stuck as is haha. Thanks for the comments. I'll definitely bring something a little better next time. I'm currently working on a progressive track. I hope this will turn out a little better.

lots of high sounding synths. nice. as a dj though i would be reluctant to spin this because of the sudden melody in the beg right from the start.

clean sound

0059 things are almost to crowded. but it holds on.
0127 too crowded i would have removed some of the inital synths to give space for the new ones. if you reduce the amnt of synths you could make this mini apex go around for some other 16 more bars before the silence

in the silence at 0154. i would not have kept that short high synth. i would have kept the other one by itself behinded.. and have the short one increases in vol slowly with some wacko effect.

i like the build up with the rest of the instruments. i would emphasize with the bass a little more... or maybe isolated it in the lowe freqs/

0300 wrong note somewhere
0328 still good
0418 instead of terminating your synths so quickly like that ... i would layer them off in a repetive melody that is 1 bar long that plays the notes played by the med synth that has played since the beg.
0512 shouldnt have brought back that synth ... and the short synth is tiring at this point....
0550 should not have brought those other synths back. this track is now unmixable because of it. and it is not really showing anything you havent showed lready before. so just get rid of this portion in my opinion. please do somethig with that short synth. make an intro and outro to so people can mix it.

positive points. The synths are great. even if they all seem to fight for the spotlight at some points they are good. the melody is catchy until you abuse it so much past the 4th minute. but it is catchy. i love the slow tempo high energy drive this track has. it makes me think of this huge giant walking through the desert in the middle of the day. i liked the effects you used and your intelligent use of your hit. i learned from that.

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Thanks for the awesome review. I'll definitely take all of that into account. I thought I was done with that track because I got sick of it, but now I want to try some of those ideas of yours. Thanks a lot and I'll definitely check out your track.

hey there lindo .
i like the paddy thing in the intro, but i dont like that plucked thingy that comes in right before the arp.

bass is weak , i dont like how you sometimes stop the beat in the middle of the "climax" before the break.

i like how you bring everything back .
i think this tune would be so much better with a really fat bass!

too me it just feels as if you are trying to repeat stuff to make the track go on for longer towards the break, might wanna add something unexpected?

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Lindo, lol, that does it means cute in spanish .
Kopi =o.

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haha yes it does kopi. It's part of my last name though so I thought it would fit alright :P. Thanks for the input Cola. I've decided I'm going to keep working on this track a little bit and perfect it. Thanks for the ideas everyone.

Will check it out at home .
Kopi =o.

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