Creepy little lead in intro is interesting.

I like the silliness in here.

The buildup is pretty cool. I like the pads in this section.

3:44 is feeling a tad bit cheesy, with the kick following the lead.

Things get back on track in the fifth minute.

I like the panning work you've employed to keep things trippy.

Despite all the bangingness of this track, a lot of the sounds seem very thin. It'd be nice to have a meaty rhythm synth in there.

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hey there!
to simplify things, this is what i didnt like: the kick and the bassline, i dunno why i didnt like it but i just didnt.

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Dymanic säger:
i love anuses
Dymanic säger:
no, but seriously, they feel good

Thanks for the input, guys.

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ok comment as i listen...
cute intro into a somewhat weak kick, then later an awesome bassline
coarse knob lfo synths are A1

groovy bass around 3:44... but the synth is cheezy as jex said
but again seriousness comes back. good...

your end synth is f-ing A1

6 months is a long time to spend on a project... but it's very good... kind of a minimal feel to it....

awesome... heh... melikes...

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Originally posted by canadian didjer ... but the synth is cheezy as jex said...

Yeah, I've gotten totally polar views on the "cheesy" part...I respect everybodies opinion...it seems either you love it or you hate it, 100% or 0%. Somebody at psynews.org apparently loved it...so ya know...i dunno, i write what i write and i never thought i'd make it this far, which isn't even anything...i just do it cuz i love it.

BTW...it's already at #4 on my site's charts...if you really like it...gimme some more clicks...it's in my signature.

Thanks to you all, again....

j.ME

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hey canadian didjer, could you gimme some pointers on not making the synth "cheezy"...what makes it "cheezy?"

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Last edited by jkurve on May-06-2006 at 06:18