Hey,
The beat, off beat bass sounds pretty basic, the synths are to dry for my taste, break is interesting, but the overall feeling of the tune is monotone.
In overall, you have the ideas, but sounds pretty amateur atm, nothing that cannot be fixed with some more hours of work , in the good side the mixdown sounds decent .
Keep it up .
Kopi =o.

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i love the begining with percs and panning bass... but the intruments that followed there kinda sounded unclean. Dont like the kick or the snare too much either.

the medium pad i mean. you might be able to clean them up by adding some effects like a very wet reverb or a high freq phaser. Then the melody would need a little more evolution on the med pad. the other is fine. at 0115 i wanted some ohhats there. or before. and an background effex sound sweep would be good for the silence to add some atmosphere. Y
those percs are really cool and original

could you critique me now man:
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