Hi guys and girls let me know what you think of this:

http://s41.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...6T3JBLHM67FPYMF

I originaly put this up a week ago but have made a few changes since.

Enjoy.

All feedback welcome.

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Hey,
Simple and nice beat at the begin, sounding more or less like yahel style , the overal sound is kinda weak, I would use a compressor to add more body to the tune, I like the synths u introduced.
In overal, it sounds pretty basic, but you have good ideas, I would boost the sound, it sounds to weak, is a nice sketch but it needs some work , keep it up .
Kopi =o.

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Originally posted by kopi_luwak Hey, Simple and nice beat at the begin, sounding more or less like yahel style , the overal sound is kinda weak, I would use a compressor to add more body to the tune, I like the synths u introduced. In overal, it sounds pretty basic, but you have good ideas, I would boost the sound, it sounds to weak, is a nice sketch but it needs some work , keep it up . Kopi =o.

The compressor...eh want it compress the ssounds though? how will a compresor make my sounds stronger?

What do you mean by weak? too thin? not loud enough?

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Sounds good! Nice bass and fx, good synths. But I dont really like the one thats come in at the end, dont think its fit. Anyway, nice job!

Akia

Anymore feedback guys and girl's?


Some one said my 2 main riffs are a tad too much in you rface and sugested using more Reverb, should i do this?, also he said the kick was too over powering and should be lowered a little?

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