I personally don't like reverb on kick. Percussion is simple. The super saw is nice and fat, very full. You need a bassline and some transition effects [sweeps/reverse crashes]. Good start.

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good start...get a fat baseline some efx etc etc...arrangment is ok..
percs a bit loud..mastering ok..synth is fat...keep it up...

The bass thud through out seemed too loud and overwhelming. Hope that helps you a little bit.

EDIT: Sorry, past the criticizm however, I really like where this track is going, and what it could be. So like the others above me have stated, keep working on it, and it will be a great ear friendly track.

thanks guys im new to production so anything helps me!

To say that is your first it has good direction it should turn out well.one thing that will help you along is a site i use a lot www.naughtyaudio.com have a look there is a lot of stuff there to help you.