any crit will be most helpful especially on how to clean the bass/kick area up! its not clean enough and i cant get it right
rich
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May-15-2006 22:23
adam_rodriguez
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2005
Location: Leeds,England
hey rich - listening - ur trademark kick and percussion are there hehe...really clean and a good groove - like the synth coming in and the stringy melody..quite sad sounding..like the bleepy effects in the background....not sure about the really high siney synth..nice buildup coming in with the piano..
really nice tune rich...maybe could with more powerful pads coming in at the end (i always say this)
Very nice track here, I just love the intro. The percussions are amazing
The kick has that "Richard Gale stamp" as usual
The second breakdown is great, and it's not a bad idea from adam about adding some big pads.
I've told you before what i think of it and I'm seing forward to the full version. It has to be nicey nicey
Great work so far!
Really nice! I like the intro and the melodies a lot. Maybe you can do something more about the end. Otherwise, a good job!
Akia
May-16-2006 14:46
avengie
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Nov 2005
Location: Brewster, New York
Well done.... You always have this Unique Stuff in your tracks Like to hear the High Bitrate tho coz Myspace player is crappy in bitrate lol...
Cheers Man
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May-16-2006 15:31
xcalator
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Nov 2004
Location:
Hey rich,
I'm listening now...
What a nice bass line melody
Very nice track rich really original.
I like the hihats , all the 80's synths
Nice stuff mate!
May-16-2006 21:20
richg101
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Registered: Apr 2005
Location: a universal nation
hey guys.
thanks for the reviews adam, alex, akia, avengie and klemsy:0)
im glad you all seem to enjoy it
i did try various synths for a powerful pad but i couldnt make it sound right... im gonna have to buy a nice korg 'm1' to continue the 'portasound' vibe.. and of course a nice virus or jp8000/nord.
any main complaints?
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May-17-2006 00:00
S-Tune
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Jun 2004
Location: Stuttgart - GTA #270
Hey Rich,
like the intro with the percussion and the rising bass!
Well, the bass is cool but it demands imo a big frequency range, maybe eqing/thinning out the bass will help you...
Don´t really like the 80´s background synth (e.g. at 4:50 min)...
But I listened to your track a few times and it´s really cool! End comes a little bit abrupt.
Keep up the good work, i like your more melodic stuff!
Cheers mate,
S-Tune
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May-17-2006 23:04
Mr Rogers
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2003
Location: Stoney Creek, ontario
cool chilled track, monster kick u got there.
love the whining synth u got go'n on around the 5min mark.
bassline very smooth, maybe a few more percussion elements could be added.
not a huge fan of the sound of the piano, but thats just taste.
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