Nice intro, nice melody and atmosphere, relly nice breaks. A bit to much in it for my taste, makes it sounds little mess, but a guess thats the way it shall be and is just my personally taste. However, its a nice track, good job!
Akia
Jun-03-2006 14:58
sterilis
Sunset Ibiza
Registered: May 2005
Location: Belfast/Ibiza/Manchester
thanks mate. yea i like alot going on in my tracks to avoid repetitiveness.
Listening now. The kick comes in too strong almost out of nowhere. I think a fade in would do a little better. Real nice atmosphere you have going. That choir sound is getting quite popular now I see . oooOOO that bass is nice and deep. The synth that just came in sounds too...vanguard-like to me. Maybe more effects to make the sound more distinct and less preset sounding. That pad is quite nice sounding, but you just got rid of that choir pad out of nowhere it sounds like. That lead is back, but it just sounds kinda weak to me. The melody still sounds a little weak to me. It doesn't sound like there is a "home" to it. The bass part of the arp I believe just came in. I don't really sense an ending to your breakdown. No tension really everything just slowly comes back in. The panning effects are getting a tad too much for me at the moment. Sounds like everything is hitting you in all directions and adds some chaoticness to it. IMO if the melody was a lot darker, then I think the effects would DEFINITELY fit the panning effects. This has the effect of a good trance[]control track with the crazy percs, but too many bright melodies to hit that vibe. It's a nice track, but could use some work on the melody. Good choice of sounds, just could use a little more solid structure.
Rating - 6/10
Jun-05-2006 03:13
sterilis
Sunset Ibiza
Registered: May 2005
Location: Belfast/Ibiza/Manchester
im still working on the intro. didnt like the way the kick came in myself. the synth is my jp8000 strange.
theres no arps going on in the breakdown. just added a few notes to increase intensity. not really going for a dark feel so ill keep the melody as it is it has good emotion. still work to be done but appreciate the feed back.
. oooOOO that bass is nice and deep. The synth that just came in sounds too...vanguard-like to me. Maybe more effects to make the sound more distinct and less preset sounding. That pad is quite nice sounding, but you just got rid of that choir pad out of nowhere it sounds like. That lead is back, but it just sounds kinda weak to me. The melody still sounds a little weak to me. It doesn't sound like there is a "home" to it. The bass part of the arp I believe just came in. I don't really sense an ending to your breakdown. No tension really everything just slowly comes back in. The panning effects are getting a tad too much for me at the moment. Sounds like everything is hitting you in all directions and adds some chaoticness to it. IMO if the melody was a lot darker, then I think the effects would DEFINITELY fit the panning effects. This has the effect of a good trance[]control track with the crazy percs, but too many bright melodies to hit that vibe. It's a nice track, but could use some work on the melody. Good choice of sounds, just could use a little more solid structure. 
strange.
