hey guys, i finished this track wich i didnt really knew in what kind of genre i could qualify this... it took me my whole afternoon and evening to finish the track. this time i was more focused on my drums, sizzlers and effects. this one is actually listenable hehe. this must be imo the best track ive made so far, i have learned so much on TA about effects and stuff. i would really like some comments one this one
thanks in advance guys!

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Last edited by Rinster on May-18-2006 at 07:43

Synth work is cool, but the kick and bass need a bit more punch and definition. Your bass in particular is very undefined.

I like the ideas you're throwing about here. From a creativeness standpoint, you're doing very well. You just need to nail down the technical aspects.

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thanks for the reply sir.

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Good experimental track, your really digging for something here. Not sure what, but it sounds pretty trippy. Nice pads. Synths are alright, but sound a bit thin at times. You need a chunky lead of sorts to bind it all together.

You seem to change the groove around a lot also. I'd try and find one that works and stick to it. The kick and bass need attention. Again, find something thats solid and lock it in.

Keep it up

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i like the melodies...bass and kick could be more present...so the synth...
good job on the percs...around 10.5 sound cool, nice phaser-flanger-fx!
maybe you could add some extra melody...

not really my cup of style, but with some more work this could turn out quite cool...
keep it up!

// Lars

thanks Klangzentrum & Axolotyl for the quality reviews! appreciate it!

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took a quick listen and it sounds good but with a few hiccups. it sounds like autechre of old: Incunabula [1993] & Amber [1994]. i'll take a few more listens and post more comments soon.


BTW

what are your computer's specs?

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Originally posted by Spacey Orange BTW what are your computer's specs?

Amd 2200+ Xp
512Mb Ram
1.8Ghz
20 + 250Gb Harddrives
Radeon 9200 128Mb 3d Card
Xp Professional

Bidor

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