Hi boys and girls of TA. Ive been offline for sometime now so I havent been able to post my comments on your tracks for the last month or so, had some trouble with my ISP, well im here again and will continue to do my best trying to comment. sry for me being offline for so long. its time to review again =)

While ive been gone I made a track and I upploaded it to myspace due to the inconvinience whit YSI.com would be nice to hear your toughts and comments, its a progresive piece named Into the deep.

See you around - Love - Mavve



Track name : Into the deep
myspace.com/mavvea

New Link: 192kbps Into the deep
sorry for insulting your ears =)

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Last edited by mavve on May-26-2006 at 19:25

It sounds nice, nothing unexpected but a nice melody and good synths. A pretty nice job!

Akia

hey man..i like this..really chilled stuff..love those faint vocals samples in the background and plinky melody..nice hi hats and good spacey FX.

Not too keen on the big synth that comes in the breakdown..sounds quite 80's..liking when the kick and percussion come back in and the subtle melodies are playing-good to listen in the summer!...yeah i like it - good work!

Adam

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myspace bitrates are crap so i can't really tell much about the production... kick sounds a bit weak.

gets a little messy around the 2 minute mark.

this song is obviously more upbeat than your other ones, can't say i like it more than "electric culture." speaking of which, what'd you end up doing with that one?

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Hi guys, tnx Akia for the comment, Ill try to make it a litle bit more "special" and change some of the araengment or so.

Yooo Adam Im glad you liked it I had fun producing it =) hmm wich big synth do you speak of the ione that continues at the climax? If so ill take care of it. Tnx for the review mate =)

and tnx Nishant for always giving honest comments, I dont know about the kick im kinda satisifed whit it. It might be the crapy myspace player that gives it a bad name or my monitors =( so I upploaded a 192 kbps Sample instead give it a listen and tell me what you think.

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.p...15BE0780799E8F3

hahaha electric culture is one of my personal favourites to, Its finnished I only need to record the last vocals. Ill give you a shout when its final. btw i love Inamorata great tune with an incredible melody.

Have nice day Boys. - Mavve

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yea the kick is pretty damn weak here.... not punchy enough on low end here... hope that helps man

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dont really want to repeat waht people have said but the kick needs some beefing up mate.

very progressive as expected from you. not too keen on the synth choices here. would like to hear something more deep and similar to your old tracks. still a nice track though. well produced and good drive.

good atmospheric efx going on. really fills the space well. not much else to comment other than nice work so far. a few adjustments and i think this track will pick up.

cheers

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tnx guys Ill look into it and add som lows, And a main melody.

- Mavve

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nice groove.. i dig the blips and beeps.. the break is nice.. percussions and drive is excellent.. this is kinda music i like.. great work

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Originally posted by mavve Hi boys and girls of TA. Ive been offline for sometime now so I havent been able to post my comments on your tracks for the last month or so, had some trouble with my ISP, well im here again and will continue to do my best trying to comment. sry for me being offline for so long. its time to review again =) While ive been gone I made a track and I upploaded it to myspace due to the inconvinience whit YSI.com would be nice to hear your toughts and comments, its a progresive piece named Into the deep. See you around - Love - Mavve Track name : Into the deep myspace.com/mavvea New Link: 192kbps Into the deep sorry for insulting your ears =)

Mr maor. Have you been tuning again =) weeel im'm surely like this one =) Its make twisting in front of the computer. I would like to know how it would be with a fullversion. I do not complain on the kick. Sometimes it could be override and be even to muck to high the kick. Maybe the bassline do would be great to make lower and pushed a little bit. But i like this track in the shape it has. Its just my opppinion if would do remix or something on the track it would have a different sound also etc. See yaaa

Cheers! Snowave §=o)

Hi guys tnx for the comments.
Subtle its always good when you like a tune =) as you might have noticed the drive was my primary object while making this, this tune is made because a fellow producer of mine doubted I could make a Club tune whit good drive=) Tnx again Subtle.

And Snowave its always fun to see fellow swedes in the scene, Tnx for listening but you might have been mistaking me with mr maor tho his a great producer it isnt me =) Im happy I made you twist around hahaha always a great sign.

The final will be a vocal trance track. ill upp it when finnished. Tnx guys and have a great day

Love - Mavve

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I like the overall sound and atmosphere of the track, it gives me kind of a dizzy feeling when all the sounds are mangling at around 2 minutes

but you do need a stronger kick, that one works as a complement so you can play around a little with it but you need to add another kick with the low end power in it.

but overall a nice track, really nice. Make shure you finish it!

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