Hmmm, not bad, but I think it could use a finishing touch. The synths sound a bit "cheap" or "thin" (don't quite know how to describe it) which gives it a bit of a cheezy sound which I personally don't like. The melody is quite nice though.
not a bad song, agree with the above "thin synth" comment. The fade at 1:28 is kinda wierd.. it almost seems like an ending, but a nice buildup after. Altogether its a nice sounding tune.
it's got a weird colored kick (too much "click", has a tone)....and I think the offbeat hihat is too loud...
The synth that kicks in at 2:40 is too loud, or loosen up on the resonance. Overall some volume settings that don't seem right to my ears.
Sooo work on your endmix/mastering
For the rest, a fairly normal track. Not really special, not bad either.
Just my 2 eurocents
Jan-09-2002 13:58
Peter Campbell
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Mar 2001
Location: Cairns Highlands, Atherton Tablelands
this track is quite different to whats around at the moment and some parts I liked and some I didn't, it needs more work on the brake downs . I don't like the sound at the 2:34 min mark. you need to spend more time on the mix.
keep up the good work
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Jan-31-2002 05:05
DancingAngel
tranceaddict in training
Registered: Jun 2001
Location: Los Angeles
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Oh thank you so much for all the reviews. Let me explain the cheapness of the sound. This whole song was laid on Yamaha DJX (first one), thats right the $300 toy for kids. Plus the song is a bit outdated now (about 2 years old). Great comments I did have doubts about all you said. Thank you you're a great help. May I offer some more songs for your reviews? Newer stuff this time although I still can't quite come up come up with money for new gear. Thank you again.
Jan-31-2002 05:59
inatrance
Arcteryx ClimbAddict
Registered: Oct 2001
Location: Seattle, WA
yup bring it on, it sounds good, I like it.. seems like some low quality samples.. or sounds, and the hard clicks at the beg. are irritating.. the song seems as if it has a loott of mastering to be done, volume, and yes.. it dies out too much after a repeat at the beg, sounds like its going to die I am liking the synth, a little shallow but it is a good buildup
Feb-01-2002 02:53
DancingAngel
tranceaddict in training
Registered: Jun 2001
Location: Los Angeles
New song
Thanks for all the reviews guys. Funny I started changing all my songs now. How do you guys feel about remixed classics. Here's my attempt to remix Thcaikovsky the Nutckruker theme, I called it Rebirth of the Dream. Again your very valuable reviews keep me alive please do say whatever the hell you feel. Right here: http://rollingstone.com/dds/downloa...p%3Frid%3D35825
Thank you
Hugz
Feb-07-2002 06:18
_Marco_
emruh firhf moize
Registered: Oct 2001
Location: In da club
Yep!
This is...hum... different....
Take care of the others advices!!!
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Feb-07-2002 18:16
DancingAngel
tranceaddict in training
Registered: Jun 2001
Location: Los Angeles
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So Marco do you like it or not, if not what didnt you like about it. I mean I know some fuck ups on it I haven't even mastered it yet but just wanna know what you think, thanks a bunch for honesty!
Re: Can any1 please review this song
I am liking the synth, a little shallow but it is a good buildup
