thought this pop song could make a good dance remix so I took a shot at it and this is what I've come up with so far. I'm feeling the track is a bit cluttered, maybe by the unusually low pitch of the singers voice. I played all the keying by ear and tried to create my own melody off it but I just couldn't find a sound that worked, either because of the patch itself or the chord progression that I made. I could use some suggestions as to what kind of sound would make a good melody to compliment the song. thanks.

She Wants Revenge - These Things (bootleg remix)