Here is a new track, on the electrotrance tip. It has a few trance and breakbeat threads woven in to an electro foundation is how I would describe. I think you will enjoy it. Let me know what you think. I am to constantly aiming to improve my productions. All comments greatly appreciated.

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hey mate, reviewing as i listen.. i like the bassline.. the background synths is nice fits it well. i see you like to keep the track simple after the firts snairfill.. the synths are nice.. i like the synth at 1:25. the break at 1:52 is VERY nice, especially that bassline that comes in. that effect at 2:58 is good. the only negative thing about this track is that it doesnt really have a proper ending, maybe you could change that. i really like the track man, good work.


Bidor

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I don't like this loopish rhytm...basline is to wet and also need good atack for it...a bit simple build - up..synths are too loud.kick need one more layer with maybe click,brush or hat...01:51 no logic.Broken structure.02:06 thats really weird and great place..I think this is'nt the end of this work..So try to finish it...
this is weird but good track
Birdie

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something nice and retro about this - dry sounds layered in staccato fashion.

can't help thinking though, we need better "produced" sounds - I'd think about how you could get this to sound a little less like it was created on a 303 an 808 and a 909 - we are in the age of amazing plugins - a track this siple needs a lot of production.

it's getting there at 2:19

ok, this needs some better production, or you need to add more elements - ideas are great, just needs something

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Hey Majutsu! This sounds interesting. Nice melody and a really nice background synth. I like the break till that the bassline comes in 2:06, think it sounds to "happy" comperes with the rest of the sound, but I guess its just a matter of taste. Anyway, I like it. Keep it up!


Takere!

Akia

critical mode:
synth needs to be quieter perhaps compress with the kick

bassline needs more bass

drums need to be worked on a bit with the volume levels

pluck is nice perhaps higher to seperate from the other layers or better eqing

/critical mode




if you used dif presets or made your own this would sound 100% better and on top of that... not much

good track

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