Hi guys....heres my latest tune - its more of a proggy style than my previous couple of songs but still with an uplifting melody....feedback & comments appreciated!
clap is too reverbish
KICK is very nice
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mixing is too wet..
need more work with atacks and releases on synths...
thats my opinion
Great track!
keep working on it!
Birdie
Jul-20-2006 08:10
richg101
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Registered: Apr 2005
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sounds great matey
clean and smooth. maybe a tiny bit reverberated. try lowering some of the reverb on a few of the trax.
bass and kick are nice.
overall sounds are really nice and epic as usual
break- loads of emotion. i can hear a nbit of mike in the progression actually. the melodies are introduced well.
beat comes back - maybe try making the main melody 1 octave higher when the kick comes back.. to highten the epic sound..?
overall i love it. i would make more cut outs of the sound so the structure has more variation.. like take the main melody away so its just the kick and bass/pads..then introduce it again slowly..etc etc etc
keep it up bro!
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Jul-20-2006 10:20
adam_rodriguez
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Registered: Apr 2005
Location: Leeds,England
Cheers for the comments guys...ive gone back and improved it a bit - took some muddyness out of the pads and added a bigger build up when the kick comes back in - i havnt reduced any of the reverb as i dont think its a big thing (yet)...
Rich : i tried putting the whole melody up an octave when the kick comes back in,but it didnt sound right so ive changed some bits of the melody to a higher octave - really like it when MIKE does that in his tracks...
