Hi guys....heres my latest tune - its more of a proggy style than my previous couple of songs but still with an uplifting melody....feedback & comments appreciated!



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Last edited by adam_rodriguez on Jul-29-2006 at 13:11

I love the energy and the uplifting melody! The vocal is nice but sounds familiar. Great potential, keep it up!

Akia

Cheers....the vocal is actually my mum - so dont know how it sounds familiar!

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clap is too reverbish
KICK is very nice
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mixing is too wet..
need more work with atacks and releases on synths...
thats my opinion

Great track!
keep working on it!


Birdie

sounds great matey

clean and smooth. maybe a tiny bit reverberated. try lowering some of the reverb on a few of the trax.

bass and kick are nice.

overall sounds are really nice and epic as usual

break- loads of emotion. i can hear a nbit of mike in the progression actually. the melodies are introduced well.

beat comes back - maybe try making the main melody 1 octave higher when the kick comes back.. to highten the epic sound..?


overall i love it. i would make more cut outs of the sound so the structure has more variation.. like take the main melody away so its just the kick and bass/pads..then introduce it again slowly..etc etc etc

keep it up bro!

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Cheers for the comments guys...ive gone back and improved it a bit - took some muddyness out of the pads and added a bigger build up when the kick comes back in - i havnt reduced any of the reverb as i dont think its a big thing (yet)...

Rich : i tried putting the whole melody up an octave when the kick comes back in,but it didnt sound right so ive changed some bits of the melody to a higher octave - really like it when MIKE does that in his tracks...

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Originally posted by adam_rodriguez Cheers....the vocal is actually my mum - so dont know how it sounds familiar!

Your mum?! Cool! I know I have heard a vocal like that before but can`t remember where, maybe you have got it here in TA erlier? However, I like it!


Takere!

Akia

Well if you heard my ambient remake of 'Arksun - Arisen' - its very similar to the vocal in that..

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You can now hear the full version here :

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..comments appreciated

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Hello Adam

Not Bad, I like your track

Bow in my thread

Keep it up

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It´s great!

Akia

Great track dude.

I love the melody and the flow, really nice.

Um, am I able to grab it anywhere or can I only listen via myspace?