Registered: Feb 2005
Location: Nijmegen, The Netherlands
The Seed by Takkra (6:00) (192kb/s) (full track)
Here's a overdeveloped soundstudy I did.. I tried to create a simple story in this track, which you prolly wont hear unless I tell you now hehe..
The story begins with a seed, which leads a normal seedlife, becoming a plant, and having a seed again. well thats it basicly hehe.. enough with the blabla. here's the track
bass has the takkra stamp. maybe needs a bit more sub to it..
ill be honest mate. i really cannot imagine a plant growing to this.. more like die..lol.
overall the track has some nice elements but bores me compaired to your others in the past
sorry man.
sound is clean tho...
some sounds to fill it up will help no end.
keep it up boss
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Jun-27-2006 20:07
Takkra
Smile if you want it.
Registered: Feb 2005
Location: Nijmegen, The Netherlands
heheh ok.. just experimenting ! I said I kept it simple and its more like an overdeveloped study hehe.. and well.. maybe im having an inspirational breakdown eheh.. I gotta hear/see some freshness somewhere.. maybe its time for a new girlfriend? hehe (sarcastic mind you!) but anyway thanks for listening and even more thanks for being honest
The sound is good! But as a track I miss the melody, the atmosphere and I can`t neither see that seed (or any story... ). You can do better!
Takere!
Akia
Jun-28-2006 09:46
Rocco
PierreM
Registered: Mar 2003
Location: Toronto, Canada
quote:
Originally posted by Akia
The sound is good! But as a track I miss the melody, the atmosphere and I can`t neither see that seed (or any story... ). You can do better!
Takere!
Akia
maybe it's an evil seed
This track is very usable for one of those nights where u just don't know what to play.
Registered: Oct 2003
Location: Stoney Creek, ontario
u got really interesting sounds here, but a lot of ur percs/synths to really top heavy, aren't filling the spectrum very well. Really liking the dark atmosphere but it just seems like this track doesn't have a destination.
keep it up !
Registered: Feb 2005
Location: Nijmegen, The Netherlands
hmm yea I miss the energy too sometimes..
my experience is just when your spinning.. lots of people start jumping on a simple :
1). Energyless breakdown, then
2). build up giving too much energy then the "climax"
3). simple kick bass/ too simple rythm combo..
So.. it worked for me :0 and with this track im just looking for the extremes hehe I really appreciated everyones time for listening to it tho Ill try something new
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? hehe (sarcastic mind you!) but anyway thanks for listening and even more thanks for being honest
). You can do better! 
