Im not a psy-trance producer but - ill appreciate the genre haha. i would say that its a decent sequence job.. kick needs to be brought up a bit i think also it comes down to preference but typically synths need a lot more verb on them to help blend them in better - just a suggestion
Keep it up
Spence
Jun-28-2006 04:17
fy_pool_day
tranceaddict in training
Registered: Apr 2006
Location: Europe, far from the Ocean
Thanks askspence68!
Jun-28-2006 06:30
iloop
one love.
Registered: Oct 2003
Location: smalltown BC
A bit dark for my taste, but you do have some good psy elements scattered around in there. My attraction to psy is mainly full on with a really moving full bassline which this doesn't really have. thanks for sharing tho.
Jun-28-2006 07:28
Akia
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Mar 2006
Location: Stockholm
I like the intro. You got a nice thriller atmosphere in this ! Nice speak too. Mutch energy. Well done!
Akia
Jun-28-2006 10:26
fy_pool_day
tranceaddict in training
Registered: Apr 2006
Location: Europe, far from the Ocean
Thank for suggestions & opinions mates!
Jun-28-2006 11:35
Nik Novo
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2003
Location: Munich, Germany
You really need to change the bassline. It's rather annoying and it's all the same for the whole track. Try to pull it down maybe one octave for the first bit
Overall the track is rather monotonous, maybe you should try to add more variations and some more synths/effects that "widen" the track. Production quality is good
What was really good was the asian instrument (dunno what it's called)!
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Jun-28-2006 14:54
cyzum
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Your kick drum is lacking high end. Your bassline could benefit from using a different synth patch. Sounds like there is reverb on your bassline? It's definitely interfering with your kick drum. I might try to also adjust the velocity on some of your bassnotes. Something like this...
rather than...
Kick dun dun dun Kick dun dun dun Kick dun dun dun Kick dun dun dun
(where dun = bass note)
Something like this...
Kick dun DUN dun Kick dun DUN dun Kick dun DUN dun Kick dun DUN DUN
(where DUN = bass note with harder velocity)
will give your bassline more bounce.
Some of your other sounds are pretty cool. I might try using sidechaine compression on that asian instrument. Could be interesting.
Good start
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Jun-28-2006 15:26
fy_pool_day
tranceaddict in training
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Location: Europe, far from the Ocean
[psy] janeysteam - lonely hearts above.mp3 - 145 bpm - full
! Nice speak too. Mutch energy. Well done! 
