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| quote: | | Originally posted by Lindo I don't think the melody is all that strong for this type of track. Simple is good, but the note progression doesn't really flow dark like I think you're attempting. I think a stronger melody would definitely move this track along a lot more. |
Can you elaborate on this? Is the melody bad or do you just mean that it doesn't fit the rest? Actually, a low-key, minimal kind of melody is what I was going for, along with an 'older' style of structure for the whole track. The melody and buildup aren't supposed to be the main feature of the track like it typically would be. So it was never my intention to have a long breakdown, just something short and sweet to introduce the lead but not long enough to have a break in the rhythm.
Thanks for the feedback.
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