Hey guys... I'm back.

My newest is a moody house track called Atuned to Tears.



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hope you guys like it!

-will

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The part that I love about this track, 1:32… it was kick ass… Loved the bass line and kick but, I wanted it to go into something more tech-house. It ended going back to where it started (trance). I see how you mixed some electro into trance, but I’m a big tech-house/electro fan so I’m a bit bias on where the song should go :P

Take care, keep making music.
Ian Buzz

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Hey.

-Intro is somewhat odd. The sweeping sound is kinda nasty with its upper freqs. BP filter it at around 400Hz with a low resonance.
-The kick seems too plasticy. Theres no life in it. Try a better sample.
-Liking the trance pluck that comes in around 2m 5s.
-Good change with the supersaw stabs in the background there but a little more note variety could help it.
-The piano should probably be replaced with something stronger. It makes the whole song feel kind of flimsy. The rythm is a little iffy for it as well.
-Decent outro. Doesnt compliment the intro but I like the sound of it more than the intro .

Overall, this song isnt too bad but several things to improve. Its got potential but def needs some hours on it.

Cheers,
Zac

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