I wanted to share what I have so far of a new tune. I'm taking it more in an uplifting/dance direction. Hopefully I'll some vocals later on.
You guys think someone could pick this up if I set it up right?


Link:
http://www.cristianf.com/mP3_DownLo...uentes-Feel.mp3

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Tracks

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EoJ-cL2G_qY

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So sorry about that guys. Thank you for even looking. Here is the updated link




http://www.cristianf.com/mP3_DownLo...ntes-%20Feel%20(Demo).mp3

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Tracks

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EoJ-cL2G_qY

The link got messed up when you posted it.
HERE is a working one.

I think it's the spaces in the filename that causes these troubles. Try using underscores instead.

Ok, on the subject of the track itself.
The kick is too loud compared to the other elements of the track.
The atmospheric plucks/piano sounds are beautiful.
Bassline is snappy and nice. Also Nice crunchy percussion.
I'd love to hear more of this.

kick is too loud and also where is this kick subpower...bassline is ssomewhere on mids...Very nice atmosphere...percs are good ,but need more noise from them..maybe try to make loop from it and dublicate it,then give some weird FX then give fro it some volume and then your percs will sound more fullier...

So
waiting
Birdie

I agree with the others. Keep it up, it has potential!


Takere!

Akia

Yes, agree on the above. kick too loud, but nice bassline, and
lead-play.

Potential you have

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