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I hate listening to stuff on myspace - they seem to reduce the quality of whatever you put up on it.
this sounds pretty muddy - but it's prolly the myspace quality thing.
nice moody intro, not quite sure if it works musically for me, the bassline (the really low one) seems kinda dischordant.
some nice sytnth work.
don't like the way it just abruptly stops to the noise breakdown, but what comes in is nice - I'd work on that transition.
I think you could work on the build as well, give it a little more atmosphere.
there is something again dischordant about when it comes in - that repetative guitary sound does it.
overall I quite like it - it's a bit moodey with a little extra work it could be a great track.
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