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1st impression is its too slow, not driving

nice use of the sequencing sounds, and a the key changes are cool. the break is good.

its a good track, just unenjoyable because of the lack of pace and drive

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ok.... I could change the BPM and make it faster*!:.. It's at 130BPM now.. hmmm I could try 140....

But I have thought of a melody....to put in the song... Because I think It's just not complete without one!:.. :/ But I don't know If I should just make it in a new song instead!:..

But thank you!:.

i agree with harry on the fact that there isn't really much drive to it, i'm not sure if speeding it up would help it or not. I also think it lacks any variation in percs so you should work on that. Come to think of it there isn't any variation in the song. Other than that it is clean and well produced. keep up the good work!

Andy

i think you start it all too early. havea bit of an intro and drop the bass in about 32 bars or over into it.

still sounds quite empty try and have something sitting behind in the mix to give it depth.

i cant really feel the melody at the minute, maybe because of the synth your using, sort of leaves the melody hidding away in the mix.

percussion and bass sound good.

get a sub lead in there after the breakdown a high mid sound would would well.

nice work on the mix of it so far. as mentioned already put the bpm up.

good luck

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