timing on this track is all over the place...theres sounds in all the wrong places. i listened to half and turned it off kuz it was bugging me so much. Theres all sorts of synths and fx out of sync with the beat, unless the beat is somehow outta sync who knows.....anyways lotta work to be done on this track. not to mention all the video game noises, lack of presence with the kick. i could go on but theres to much to list.
only reason im being so harsh is that u called it a demo, meaning you must be eventually wanting to send it out i guessing. either way back to the drawing board u go kuz im sure u'll have other similar comments.
i'll check it out again on ur next attempt
cheers

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