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very very good track overall
some things i would do if i were you:
make the break longer - it would draw your listeners more. a good track deserves a long break.
add a secondary lead - maybe a tinged sine or something in the background to switch things up a little bit. if your feeling a little adventrous maybe add a tertiary lead.
speed it up - just a little bit. for me its a little slow (what tipped me off was the feeling of a long build-up). i feel this track could be a great dance track remix.
d(-_-)b
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