Hi there. ;]
I'm glad that places like this exist , cous it feels g00d beeing surr0unded fr0m people with c0mmon interests like y0u. That's my first p0st s0... i'm kinda filling r0okie. ;]
Anyways that's 0ne 0f my latest pr0jects i'm still working on.
s0ftware : FL Studio
style : melodic trance

I'll be thankfull 0f any criticism , suggestions and advices.

http://shells.doychev.net/chushleto/ChL%20Mem%20Mix.mp3

i like the way your track starts off, but after 2:15 it becomes generic. sound like a game track and i like game tracks. a few things to note are

1. try to change the presets for synths.
2. adding some distortion would be cool
3. the quality is not very good. i think using better presets may solve the problem.