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Originally posted by [nxx] 8) hi guys! did it last night. um have a good weekend. heres the link to download. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4361209

sweet track man, your track called "neuro" is still on my mp3 player man some good music, keep up the good work!

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8) hi bidor. hows it going. um thanks for the feedback. i just updated the track, i added an eq, lowered the hifreq on one particular percussion hihat that was sticking out. and the kick is bit softer, found it too bumpy before. thats bout it. oh and hi lindo and akia and others. and have a good weekend. mondays a holiday over here in london.

yousendit/sendspace link please

soundclick doesnt work with me for some bizzare reason

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Found Atlantis - Mixography [mix archive/mokumentary/my soul]?
i writed a song.

hi KilldaDJ. heres the yousendit url you asked for.
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.p...0FECF4F706C8E0C

sounds like something industrial

some kinda lethal industry type thing going on here, though theres no real melody riding thru that either

this sounds more tech trancey almost verging onto techno

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Found Atlantis - Mixography [mix archive/mokumentary/my soul]?
i writed a song.

Time to check it out nxx.

Listening now...

I'm really digging the beginning right now. Nice percussions
Bassline sounds a little muddy.
Those high cymbals are REALLY starting to drown out the mix at 1:15.
The track sounds really off right now because those highs are starting to hurt my ears. I don't know if you high shelf eq all your cymbals, but there is no need to because it's really making the mix sound off.
I think the bassline should have 8 bars instead of just 4. The melody I feel could use some more variation to it. 4 bars isn't enough to really keep it going for the length it goes. The overall arrangement is okay. I think it could use some more variety. The production itself isn't that great. This is mainly due to the poor mixdown and mastering used. Work on your mixdown a lot because those highs are really overdriving your mix, when they should just be there to give most instruments some clarity. Also if you're eqing, use small boosts like 2-3dB increments or cut certain frequencies instead of boosting the other ones.

hi lindo and KilldaDJ. thanks for the feedback.
um yeah lindo, i always seem to have issues with the eq part. I'll try out reducing the newly added master eq as thats doing the hifreq bit. about the bassline clarity, did you find the last track nxeo the systemf exhale one much better than this track. anyway both track could use an update as theyre both hifreq.

let me listen to the other track nxeo to see if it's about the same because if i remember correctly...most of your tracks sound like this. Leave me a message on msn or something sometime and maybe I can help you get a cleaner production.