w00t w00t rap trance waiting for something like that...

w00t vocoder cool... silly....

no vocs??
pauses... waiting for vocs... here we go !!!!

catchy...

this must be finished... or ill kill you

i'm really interested....

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Sounds good, different. Keep working!

Akia

haha thanks for the reviews...i know that the reverb is off a little bit considering its a rough draft. i'll update the link w/some changes when I get to my pc. Anyone else?

Andy

Good work !!
I'd like to see one day a complete remix.

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thanks for comments.
I have updated the link (in the top of the post) with another verse and an interesting little breakdown. Sorry if the mastering is a little off, i'm not very good at that yet. I'm looking forward to your comments. Thanks.


Andy

interesting intro. i like it.


sounds quite industrial. this sounds great actually i think a more upront sound could be had from a better mix. bring all the parts up a bit. like your chord synth and your percs. kick is fine. nice and clean.

the main 'intergalactic' vox needs a better introduction into the track. in fact i would not introduce it until after the main human vocal like you have done.

i think the vocals need to be cut down a bit. they make the track a bit cheesy. i would find the best lines and intermittedly drop them here and there.

omg! the main break is great! this is perfect. breakbeat is a bit standard. i would drop it and use some of your other subtle percs.

i would concentrate on a track built around that fantastic break. go purely dub on the main sections. building into that break(for abbout 2-3 mins). drop the vocals totally imo. dont use the intergalactic vocal accept within the break. i think you could make a really sophisticated remake using what you have made here.

great potential matey

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Thanks Rich
I'm planning on making a dub of this as well. I don't particularly care much for the the vocals either but i'm making it to spin out at some bars around here...and most people thouroughly despise any form of electronic music unless it is a cheesy remix of something popular. Thanks for the feedback though. Anyone else?

Andy

its nice but id do more w/ the percussion

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thanks wizniz. I was thinking of making it a bit tribal. Thanks for all the critiques!
Andy

Great stuff....Intergalatic is one of my favorite Beastie Boys songs! Can't wait to see a finished version.

I'm no producer by any means, but I would make the beginning more banging right off the bat.

DA

thanks dark angel...i'm in the process of making the whole thing a bit more bangin'

glad you liked it dude
thanks
andy