And here it is: my submission to the VGM mix. Before I submit it, though, I'd like to consult a bit. I'm not too horribly pleased with the way the song develops right now. I'm thinking I want to change some of the elements around, but I'm not sure where I should put them.

This is the final of the song, though. The edited version would just be an edit for the mix.

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15:27 | 192 kbps | 21.2 Mb | 140 BPM
Made in FL Studio
Synths used: Synth1, Triangle II, Tweakbench Pressure, Fruty DX10, Audiorealism Bassline, 3xOsc.

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ok jex... your on.

cool start... good to know someone else uses flsamples.

neat filters around 0:50

bah... I'm not gonna get around to finishing a track for this vgremix project...

kick rolls in around 2:26 with a killer acid line and neat filters.

it meanders around neat psychedelic effects for awhile.

neat melodic bit around 8:20

definately very dark and twisted... aroun 10:57

very spooky take on metroid

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Love the intro on this. Awesome FX aswell. Love the Acid and what sounds like vocal samples? either way love them. You have inspired me to add more layers to my tracks, its something i dont do but your track has helped me.


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Kick sounds weak to me though

Loving the intro... would've prefered a tad bit more atmospheric pads tho.

Just a quick stop to show off the version of this track that will appear in the mix:

jex - Metroids (VGM Mix edit)

I like the layout a bit more in this version, but then this one lacks the length of the former, and I like long songs.

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Originally posted by thoughtlessjex Just a quick stop to show off the version of this track that will appear in the mix: jex - Metroids (VGM Mix edit) I like the layout a bit more in this version, but then this one lacks the length of the former, and I like long songs.

hey mate reviewing as i listen, nice beat mixing in the beginning. im not really liking that shooting effect.. 2:17 nice breakdown... very creepy with that bell effect.. the bassline kind of reminds me from the metroid games. youve got some nice effects throughout the track. 9:00 i like the synths that pop in, kind of tech/trancy. 12:30 i somehow had a kindof uplifting feeling there, the sounds are really weird but in a good way. thanks for sharing the track. the only thing i have to say about this track is to maybe change that shooting effect and the length, maybe 7/8 minutes will be enough. keep up the good work!

Bidor

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