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| quote: | Originally posted by Nomen Nescio
Hey subtle,
Listened to the track. This is uhh different I like the start with the percussions, really nice choice of percloops. The basskey sounds weird but it goes well with the percs for some reason.
I think you had no idea how to reach the breakdown so that just shows up out of nowhere. Nevertheless it is a very nice leadsound and notation you got going there. I am still not sure about the bass.
After that first leadsection a nice sort of breakbeatsection kicks in. You are just playing with loops from I think the Vengeance club sounds after each other but it is fun as hell to listen to
However again it sounds as if you just did not know how to melodically build up towards the leadsections But once the leadsynth is playing I am very much hooked. A very full sound you got going here and a lot wider and better than your previous tunes. Really nice!
Too bad that after the 2nd leadsection you again come back for a third one, you have lost my attention here and it again listens as if you are a bit clueless of how to construct the track 
Overall a pleasant listen though! And the percs in this track are of the hook!
Cheers!
Nomen Nescio | hey mate and thx for the feedback.
you are a very observative guy as you were right in all ur assumptions.. i did use loops from the VEC, i didnt have a clue of how to get to the breakdown, and from the second leadsection i didnt know what to do as the track was kinda short, so i brought back the first leadsection back again.
and yes i was a bit clueless as it`s not the standard chords progressions and melodies i had to work with, hence i didnt know quite how to construct it, kind of a trial and error method.
thanks again 
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