Hey Marshall!

Its not a pure trance, you need to make it deeper. Trance usually needs a lot of sounds. You surely need more in songs.
Maybe you need samples or i dont know, but you dont use many of importants like strings, pad's.
Anyway you use mostly drum and bass that i dont like
The music is a little bit boring. The biggest advantage is calmnest. You would make better ambient than trance, but its tranceaddicted so i dont know what was your target.
I dont know, whats the mainspring, but if you put all your motives together, it may sound much better
I never said this music sucks or something, but i dont like it very much. Its my own opinion, but dont give a break.
Make more and learn.
My own music isnt perfect and i know that its easier to rate and comment than makin music :P
I'm waiting for your next creations.

Oh btw. where did you get the vocal from its nice for me

Last edited by sedric on Aug-30-2006 at 22:57

A good start! They are really driving and I like the melodies a lot. But you have to clear up the sound, it is a bit muddy. However, keep working, you definitely have the talent and as long you have fun it can never be a waste of time!


Takere!

Akia

Thanks for your feedback Akia,I'm not sure what you mean by its muddy and I need to clean it up,can you explain a bit more please.

The mixing could be better. But I´m sorry, I can not help you with any details ´couse i´m not a producer myself.