Hi guys...this is a track ive been working on - a bit different to my normal style - slightly darker with a bit of a M.I.K.E. feel to it - its based on a track i made last year but wanted to give it an overhaul in my Magdelayna alias

..feedback appreciated

>>> Magdelayna - The Perfect Light [preview]

Adam

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I like the opening strings and the synth that sneaks in at :46 and so on
nice transistion at 2:18

hey man
sounding great now. better drive, cleaner.

problems - bass was interfering with your kick. maybe add a bit more comp to your kick to free up headroom.

percs - i think you need to bring your percussions up in volume - by a lot. the drive will improve so much. the snare is barely audiable and i think this would be awsome if it was louder. i think when loud the reverb on the percs might be a bit much so lower the ammount of reverb until you get it sweet:0).

the melodies are faultless and the structure is bang on - with a little more variation in the intro i think. but the mix lowers your potential drive imo.

overall i still love this pice mate:0) - as i did ages ago!

keep it up and have a ply - id like to hear the results.

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