Hi m8!
Intersting . I like this. Its cathy 80s sound somewhere in the track that you have found in the sound. But i found it a little bit strange in tha puase. You mayby you should time stretch the vocals because it cause a unbalance against the rest of the track. But good luck. I know that you can push this more far then. it s not finished. Need mayby a saw lead or simular t fillin the track.

Cheers Snowave

7.5. very good!

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Originally posted by dj_kane Title - Home BPM - 132 Style - Trance Put this together today afer starting a progressive tune it turned into this. There still might be a few glitches, not too sure if the vocal is in sync as i dont no the original bpm so had to guess. I used the original melody as your not going to create a better one than that. I put an uplifting, progressive and breakbeat feel to see how it would work. anyway let me know what you think! Coast 2 Coast - Home (Sterilis Remix) For those who want a preview, theres one on my myspace. MYSPACE

Hey mate, I really liked this until about 4:42 where the parts all start clashing with one another and create some weird discordance. There's something wrong in there! Other than that, the chilled feel of it is awesome and the vocals are lovely. Arrangment is pretty cool too.

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thanks for the feedback.

i think the vocal is causing that problem pho mo as it wount sit in due to me having to guess the bpm. i think ill remove the vocal from that part as it clutters it up.

thanks

EDIT: Removed the vocal after the break. think it works better without it.

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Nice track man!!! Will be in my next September promo mix

cheers mate! let me know when your doing your set.

anyway its updated sounds better than it did i think



anyone else?

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I love the melo/chill and the vocal is really good! Nice job!


Takere!

Akia

hey mate reviewing as i listen,

[0.07] nice vocals and pads at start.
[0.14] love that background synth....
[0.38] neat introduction of bassline.. Imo the kick could use a bit more punch..
overall the beats and hihats are well layered, well done.
[2.54] cool breakdown.. love that bass effect... vocals are neat.
[3.36] love that synth!! very cool.
[4.30] cool love this
you definatly spent some time on this tune!.....
[5.56] the bassline sounds a bit soft.. maybe turn the volume a bit up?
outro is good, easy to mix in with other tunes... love that melody at the end lol

definatly a keeper!
thanks for sharing.

Bidor

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thanks mate

appreciate the feedback!

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i think that retro pads sounds a tad outta place for me...
love'n the plucked melody..really classy
the pad after the break is a lot better..needs be be warmed up though. some reverb would help, up the attack a tad maybe... I think that pad is lacking a bit of bottom end..i think that would add tons of depth to the mix. Copy/paste the pad sequence in a lower octave and it will add some girth to the mix.
nice track

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thanks for the review mate

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Hey

I really like this take on the track, heard a few remixes recently and this is very good!

The spread melody at 3:35 is gorgeous.
Id say the kick needs to come out a bit maybe, but the bass is real nice

Good job

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