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Hey! Neat track.
Its a little chaotic until the new synth comes in at 0:45. Nice main melody at 1:20, but i would like a bigger build to get there. Nice subtle break at 1:38. Like the sweeps and effects around 2:30. Again, would like a bigger release after the build at 3:00. Nice transition at 3:43 along with a nice break. One of my favorite parts right here. Watch your levels around 5:19, everything gets suddenly louder.
Overall this is a fun, neat track. I like the melodies, but i feel like the main synth could have, not sure how to put it, a more pronounced attack i guess. I think the releases from the builds could use something a little more as well. Just a little cymbal crash or something. I think overall, the track could use a little more drive. A punchier kick may help with that, though keep the low end on it like you have now, i really like that. Anyways, thats my opinion, take it or leave it. Again, nice work.
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